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I'm really enjoying this story, Clancy. I'm in.

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thanks Sharron. this chapter and the coming ones are where we really establish what is to come.

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I am up to chapter 14. Great story — I wish I had time to sit down and read it all at one time.

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Oh my goodness. I enjoyed getting some insight into the families in these last few chapters. I can feel something less than good brewing under it all, though.

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You would be correct...

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"...even though I couldn’t see his eyes, I knew there was no sort of remorse in them, at least none like what Tommy had after stealing the iced tea." Ah, the apple doesn't fall very far from the tree. This does not bode well.

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Indeed it does not haha. So often our foibles are those passed down to us from our parents, albeit slightly mutated.

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Yup, like his father in some ways, mother in other. Thanks EK!!

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